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Understanding My Plan
Author: Olly Man

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God
What's my plan
I'm trying to understand
All the responsibilities of becoming a man
Who is in command
Am I going to die soon
Or am I going to survive
Stay alive
Like in those cartoons
No one understands me
I suffer from pain constantly
And it sure is a shame
That I'm going to have a heart attack
From all this stress,
All this pain

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Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Wednesday, June 8 2005, 01:19 am

Olly

Another good one. I like the way your words change direction. It goes this way for a while, then it switches up; super pattern Olly Man!
 
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