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Lots Of Emotion
Author: Olly Man

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Now I can admit, that your not the one for me
Even though, the love I have for you will always grow
I feel like I've been blown, beaten with evey kind of stone
I'm not gonna start to trip, god I'm gonna load this clip
I feel like I've been ripped, stripped of my clothes
Why am I on this earth, I don't even know why my mom gave birth
Everyday decked out like a little smurf, gangsta crip
I'm losing my mind, I need someone has to remind me that
my life is worth living

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ginger Fish (165.76.25.19) -- Sunday, February 9 2003, 03:21 pm

My opinion

I felt like everytime I was just about to really get into this poem, something happened that sounded (for lack of a better word) cheesy. While I still enjoyed it, and have similar feelings much of the time, I still would have liked it to be a little more deep. But this is merely my opinion, and not my poem. It was written from your point of view and thats your way. Thanks for writing it. I enjoyed it.
Haitiansansation509 (10.86.3.4) -- Wednesday, February 18 2004, 07:25 pm

I feel U

Yo man i feel where u coming from cause i'm a crip to and i'm going to all that drama right now and i just don't know who to trust and everyday i wonder whats gonna happen tomorrow. Holla at your boy. C-Block THE NEXT GENERATION!!!
 
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