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Reflection In The Evening Sky
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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A night cloud
Shadows the burnt orange moon
It's crisp edges
Suddenly softened
Disguising the dark side
Which it refuses to reveal
On most clear evenings

Refuses to reveal itself
To a similar being
Which travels on the ground
And has no cloud
To shadow it's forbidden nature
Whose eyes are crisp
And smile whistful

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Princess Moon (168.53.173.132) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 08:42 pm

Absolutely Scrumpcious!

I loved the line "Shadows the burnt orange moon", that really grasps the sort of texture you see in nature itself, along with "To shadow it's forbidden nature. Whose eyes are crisp", this poem sort of reminds me of a sort of color and quite put together...like salmon pink and lemon yellow. Just to put it shortly, This poem was scrumpcious!
Pamela (66.38.146.204) -- Thursday, January 29 2004, 03:24 am

Why Thank Ya

Thanks Princess Moon, glad you liked the descriptions so much.
I would have to say that it is one of my favorites :O)
 
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