Author: Pamela O'Brien
If my words represent myself
Backwards written be must they
So the mirror image staring back at me
Am really I who portrays
Partially in order and control
Escaped have emotions certain
And their randomly cruel purpose
Love lost a with me burdens
If I tell you a little secret
Well as it keep to swear must you
Trust is something I've never felt and
Knew never I something is truth
Beginning the only is
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Corrie (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 02:01 pm|
I really like this poem, I've been reading your work for awhile now and I just love it. This one is so creative, please keep sharing your gift with the rest of us.
|PAMELA (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 02:40 pm|
Thanks Corrie, I appreciate your taking the time to comment. I always try to share the deepest parts of myself through my poetry, because I love to read the deepest parts of everyone else too :o)
|Stacey (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 03:17 pm|
Wow, i absolutely love this poem. Pam, you're very talented and definitely creative. I look forward to reading your writings. Excellent job.
|Terrie* (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 04:01 pm|
You go girl!!! i love this... this is the same uniqueness and style in some of the poetry that my husband possesed...keep sharing...great work Terrie*
|Your Melody (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, January 7 2004, 10:21 pm|
This poem was absolutely superb! I really like the way you draw a long ago love into, and the way you end the poem. Great job!
|luc (126.96.36.199) -- Thursday, January 8 2004, 02:00 am|
lovely, wonderful, confusing, yet... cool. hehe.. great work, :)
|Pamela (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, January 8 2004, 03:09 am|
Wow! I am a little flattered by the reaction to this one! I guess I thought most of you would think I was backwards or something (lol)
Thanks all of you - it makes me want to keep writing when I hear your kind words.
|LinzAy (184.108.40.206) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 04:05 am|
AGH! This is great Pam!!!!!! Very creative. Love it!
|sue (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, April 13 2004, 07:20 pm|
I can't understand it.
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