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The Nature Of Two Lovers
29 October, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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In the way that the sun shines upon us
Two lovers must do the same
And remain in balance with one another
While they evolve and change

In the way a poppy seed is sprouted
Two lovers should also do
Grow seperate from one another
But rely on the same roots

In the way a child reflects it's parents
Two lovers should bare resemblence
By educating one another
But still finding time to be a lover

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.233.248) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 02:13 am

finding time to be a lover....

i love all your poems... this one reminds me of how my husband and i always managed to find time for one another we never gave the fire enough time extinguish even though we were parents, it is extremely important not to forget about yourself and your spouse a rule always to be followed to the T ...
keeps everything in balance..thanx for an intriguing poem..
Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 02:23 am

Yay!

I am delighted that you found this and read it because it holds a special place in my poetic heart. If you and your husband had this, you are applauded - because it isn't easy to do. Once again, thanks for commenting :o)
Terrie* (65.148.232.11) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 05:19 am

Thanx.....Pam

right you are.... it was not that easy but...we always managed to find the time for our moments of intimacy, w/o denying our children their quality time...but in all relationships there are sacrafices one must be willing to make. your poem is an excelent source to inspire on role change and acceptance..once again great writing, keep sharing.
 
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