Would It Be Alright
Author: Pamela O'Brien


Would it be alright
If I sat with you tonight?
We could ride with the stars
If we hold the reigns tight

Would it be okay
If I make love to you today?
We could hide under the blankets
Like children at play

Would it be too much
To savour your every touch?
We'll need to remember them
When things get a little rough

Would it be alright
If I dance with you tonight?
We don't need any music
Just the rythym of time


Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Thursday, October 16 2003, 04:25 am

good one Pam

excellent wording ....keep sharing what is in your heart...
Sean J ( -- Wednesday, December 27 2006, 06:20 am


Heloo I was so touched ans inspired with ur poems there all terrific and heartfelt. I was wondering if i could send this poem to a dear friend that means the world sho i havent seen in such a long time. It mean the world to me and her.
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