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Frustration
4 September, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Frustrated from the inability, to
Re-create the hidden part of me, can't
Understand why the chords won't come
So my entire world comes undone
Trying to cope with the
Realization that I won't ever be
As good as him
The music he plays turns sorrow
Into beauty, and my
Only wish is that
Now, he'll do it to me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Monday, October 13 2003, 12:25 am

Thanks!

Thanks Dreamer :o) That's the way it's supposed to be.
Terrie* (65.136.6.221) -- Tuesday, October 14 2003, 06:49 pm

great job.... Pam

very unique..i like this..i really admire the beauty in all your poetry..kind of like a recipe w/all the perfect ingredients, that by sight all can savour the beauty in it and they carry it thru out the day and are kept satisfied...keep them posted...
Pamela (66.38.146.7) -- Wednesday, October 15 2003, 03:55 am

*blush*

Terrie! You are so kind! I am glad though, that you were kind to this poem because it is definitely a tender subject for me. Sometimes, my inability to express what I'm feeling through music comes out in poetry instead. Not that there is anything wrong with that but like it says, it can be frustrating at times!
I hope to create some more good recipes with some interesting new ingredients for you soon :o)
 
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