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No Sense In Writing
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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No sense in writing sensical
It all seems so illogical
Searching for something prodical
But we ourselves are methodical

No sense in writing poetry
It's all a huge conspiracy
We come and go spiratically
Our emotions are a catastrophe

No sense in writing syllables
The pattern is uncomfortable
Wait! I'm being hypocritical
The power of words is unbelievable

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (171.75.220.179) -- Wednesday, October 8 2003, 01:19 pm

Glad I read this through...,

Pamela,

This reminds me of Cap's "Baby Crying" I was beginning to think you had fallen down some stairs and suffered a serious head injury.

Very Good and entertaining.

MartinV
Lady Moon (206.216.224.123) -- Wednesday, October 8 2003, 11:13 pm

Awesome poem!

I really liked the little bit of humor in the end there. Great work! Couldn't have CORRECTED myself better! LOL Nice job!
Ben (67.123.244.43) -- Thursday, October 9 2003, 05:40 am

Cool, Pamela! Your No Sense approach...

Cool, Pamela! Your "No Sense" approach in this poem was enjoyed by my eyes. I read it through a couple of times and I like the humor in it! Perhaps there is a bit of a poetic clown inside you? Ha! Ha! Haaa! Writing can be a funny thing at times! Thank you!
Pamela (199.216.176.253) -- Thursday, October 9 2003, 04:51 pm

Thanks Guys!

Thanks everyone for writing sensical comments to my not-so-sensical poem! It was a bit humorous, but there is a serious underlying message too.....
 
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