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Two In A Tiny Town
1 October, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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At first
You were just someone I could talk to
Someone to share my passion with
For music and living alike

We knew
Each other for years and years
Both trying to make it in this
Tiny little town we call home

But as we sat
Discussing the power of personality
It became evident that we connected
And I became somewhat intrigued

It grew
I wasn't attracted to you at first
But today you looked so cuddly
And I wanted to show you affection

What now?
Should I act upon these feelings
Or allow time to take it's course
I think you are interested too

I'll wait
And see what tomorrow brings us
Because if nothing else at all
I will treasure your friendship

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (67.28.94.63) -- Friday, October 3 2003, 03:22 pm

To much sweet water can kill a flower.

Pamela,

This is good work and with emotion of experience, you give sound advice. If, the mutual attraction/feelings are there, they will grow, to much sweet water and be a flower's end.

Very good!
MartinV
Pamela (199.216.176.253) -- Friday, October 3 2003, 05:53 pm

Martin....

Thanks again Martin, I am hoping that it will grow into something, but not so fast as to become scary or sour. Thanks for reading this one :o)
 
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