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All I Can Do
23 September, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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To look for you
Is like a reflex
Every time I drive past your house
And every time I am out and about
All I can do is look

To think of you
Is like a reflex
Every time see a picture of us
Remembering all the good times passed
All I can do is think

To hope for you
Is like a reflex
Every day is a chance we'll meet
A second chance for you and me
All I can do is hope

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Charmaine (165.21.174.219) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 11:56 am

Nice poem..!

I know wad u mean..haha..great job..!
Angel Laney (205.188.208.139) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 05:59 pm

Good

That's great. I really felt what you were feeling when you wrote it! I loved it.
Pamela (142.179.146.160) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 09:36 pm

:O)

Thanx you two, I wrote this in a few minutes sitting in an office building, because I had just returned from a car trip and it dawned on me how much I look for "him." It's ridiculous! So automatic that I am not sure how to stop doing it! Anyways, thanks for reading and complimenting.
Martin Vann (65.57.60.48) -- Wednesday, September 24 2003, 11:29 pm

Not bad, for a girl...,

Pam,

Love is a heart-beat of your love, each beat, a reflex, telling you to breath, else you die, with that love in-side your heart, so precious, this love.

I can't think of a better way to go, if, you were to take your place as an evening star, than to you, as I'm sure you know, he loves you to. He would write, to that special star, I love you to, and I never had to think, about, how I feel for you. Shine on, evening star, until I shine with you, as I did, here below. I love you, evening star.

Hey, not bad, for a girl!

MartinV
 
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