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Enough
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Enough
Of the constant loneliness
Enough
Of the empty darkness
Enough
Of pretending to be strong
Enough
Of feeling so sad so long
Enough
If seeing your handsome face
Enough
Of knowing your in a far away place
Enough
Of acting as if its ok
Enough
I want you in back in my arms today

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (63.65.187.71) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 06:51 am

May I continue

enough, of putting yourself through this
enough, of the useless pain
enough, of wanting what you cannot have
enough, holding onto a lie

sorry, couldn't resist.... it is a wonderful writing of the hopelessness of fighting within yourself
Pamela (66.38.146.116) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 05:35 pm

Tarna

Very nice! You liked the angry enough! poem......
Yeah, these aren't really feelings I have now, but did at one time. The feelings I have for him today are more at peace. But still existent......
Charmaine (165.21.205.166) -- Sunday, September 21 2003, 04:18 am

Nice one..!!!

Heyy..great poem..! I know wad you're feeling..cuz I'm still feeling the exact same thing till today..look forward to reading more of your poems.
Alexander (24.189.148.204) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 10:06 pm

My Unicorn

I've always been the type of kid that wanted what I could
never have. Always been the kid that wanted what other people have. Just the fact that of knowing that I can't have it makes me turned on, and wanting it more. But whats the point of wanting something that you know you cant have.
martin Vann (171.75.220.166) -- Saturday, October 11 2003, 09:38 pm

Enough?

Pamela,

My, this is to the hear. As you say, enough is enough, yet, when there is on one in this world, that can take the place of..., Well, there never is enough, is there.

Pamela, your work is becoming more and more excitine, and filled with honesty, just the way I see it.

This is very good!
If my heart wore a hat, I would take it off to this poem.

Martin V
P.S. Almost as good as drining in a quiet, noisy, rain.
 
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