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Cause & Effect
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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A soul seeks a body
A body seeks a mind
And a mind, creates a soul

A heart seeks a lover
A lover seeks compassion
And compassion, shapes a heart

A new life seeks a beginning
A beginning seeks an end
And an end, sparks a new life

A thought seeks an emotion
An emotion seeks a spirit
And a spirit, provokes a thought

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (67.28.88.252) -- Tuesday, August 19 2003, 01:43 pm

Very Good!

Pam,

At first, it seemed complicated, caused me to think, which hurts. Once I thought about it, hey, this is very well said, quite simple and honest, actually.

Thanks
MartinV
Terrie* (65.148.209.139) -- Wednesday, August 20 2003, 05:44 am

seeking...

Pam, very powerful & mighty as the wind...expressed alot...with very few simple words....i enjoyed it, thanks for sharing...Terrie*
Pamela (66.38.146.2) -- Wednesday, September 17 2003, 01:25 am

Thank You

Thanks so much guys, this poem really was exposing a part of myself in some strange way. I just thought about the cycle of life and how it affects thigns we don't even know it affects. Glad that it came out right!
 
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