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Watching Them
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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All around me
People are living
And I am just standing still

I watch them
As they progress
With a growing fear that I never will

Every person
That passes by
Has a future written on their face

I watch them
Because I know
That my expression is blank

I watch them
Living their lives
Because I can't get grip on mine

Deep inside me
I am dying
But my smile continues lying

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.147.196) -- Wednesday, August 6 2003, 06:00 pm

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i liked. especially the last line... :)
Pamela (194.125.159.162) -- Sunday, August 10 2003, 08:37 pm

Luc.....

I knew you would like that one, haven't heard from you in awhile :o)
What can I say about the last line-it is the one line I would choose to describe me if I had to narrow it down.
 
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