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What Do You Love
26 May, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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What do you love about yourself?
Don't be afraid to say

What do you admire about you?
Tell me, it'll be okay

Every once and awhile
You have to give yourself some praise

So answer me this
What do you love about yourself today?

------- Author's Notes -------

I would LOVE to recieve some poetic responses to this poem.....(hint, hint)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.96.77) -- Thursday, May 29 2003, 08:30 am

''''''

What do I love about my self?
My personality I suppose


What do I admire about me?
That I stand firm no matter how hard the wind blows


I never really think that i deserve praise
Until someone makes me ponder

So I'll answer you this today
For today I leave myself in awe and wonder.....


Good poem Pam! Hope you enjoyed my response :)
CrYsTaL (204.32.65.195) -- Thursday, May 29 2003, 01:38 pm

nice poem

This poem really gets the mind thinking on the how they should give themself some praise. I usually put myself down, but after this poem-I see a different side, thanks for showing it to me. Awesome poem!!!
Ash (24.97.207.68) -- Thursday, May 29 2003, 11:00 pm

Wonderful

I don't praise myself very often...ok ...i never praise myself, which i know isn't good because everyone has something to be proud of, even me. Your poem is one every person should read everyday.
LYZ TORRES (4.60.184.88) -- Friday, May 30 2003, 06:40 am

in happiness & thought

what do i love a bout my self gee thats so hard to say but if i had to id probably say that i like that im quiet things are just better off that way. give my self praise i try so hard but its not easy you see its hard for someone like me to live each day and not want to wake its so hard for goodness sake. i try so hard to smile each day but its hard when no one looks your way so much has happened to this teen so much more that you couldnt possibly dream but one thing that makes me the person i am is knowing that god holds my hand he helps me see the person i am and because of him i am glad to see that he realy does love me for me i hold my head hi and kiss all my problems away because tomorrow WILL be a better day so to you i say this in happiness and in thought that i wish you good luck on all that you do because only you can love you for you:)
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, May 31 2003, 03:53 am

Nice poem!

OK i loved this topic and you did very well on making a poem with it. Ok here is mine...

What i love about my self is the fact that i can do ANYTHIG for a friend and know they would never do the same for me ex:take a bullet for them

What i admier about my self is the fact that i can stand up for myself to anyone and i dont let anyone walk all over me or push me or my friends and family around.

thats about it. again, great poem!
Pamela (194.125.158.58) -- Sunday, June 1 2003, 05:54 pm

Wowsers!

Nice responses you guys! I wasn't sure if anybody would even take me seriously but apparantly I was wrong. You all wrote awesome answers and I am glad that I made you take the time to think about what you like about yourselves.
Thanks again and maybe we will see more of these poems in the future :o)
shan (152.163.252.40) -- Monday, June 2 2003, 01:30 am

this poem hit me

I dont think i've eva takin the time to think about weather or not i deserve praise for my actions.. or what i admire and love about myself. but you gut me thinkin about it.. i guess i love my ability to not give up on things i want. the ability to be strong for myself. and i admire my art work, and my effort i put in to it.. and i prolly wouldn't have thought about that if i didn't read ur poem.. caught my eye and made me...... think. luv it.
Pamela (194.125.159.145) -- Thursday, June 12 2003, 06:48 pm

Shan.....

Glad I made you take a seond look at yourself. Re-evaluation of your own self can be life-altering.And other times, it can just remind you to smile because your not THAT bad! LOL
 
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