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Freeze
8 April, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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A moment so perfect
No words to describe
The content and serene sensations
I am experiencing inside

Life surrounds me
And I just bite my lip
Quite enjoying the chance to observe
And just take it all in

Press pause
Let me stay
This is my true love
This moment, this day

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 03:00 pm

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now i enjoy reading this.sweet!
Ghost (131.216.163.164) -- Thursday, April 10 2003, 06:55 pm

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I really liked reading this. Sometimes I wish there was a pause button on life to freeze those beautiful moments.
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 04:01 am

nice!

This is amazing. I loved this topic. Nice poem! I have always wondered if there could be a freez button because so many wonderful things go unnoticed each day and if we had a freeze button life would be all the more enjoyable.
Faith (66.206.228.88) -- Saturday, July 17 2004, 03:13 am

Great Poem

I think you did a wonderful job writing this poem. Keep up the good work!!!! I'm looking forward to reading more of you writings.
 
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