Remember That Kiss?
29 March, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien
There was a certain quality in the air that night
As we walked dark alleyways guided by the moonlight
Do you remember the way we stood separate from the world?
You, a burdened soul and I, a lost little girl
We found each other in the blackness somehow
Seems so surreal looking back on it now
Remember that kiss? You leaned in
I blushed like we committed a deadly sin
I blushed because that kiss made me feel like a movie star
With the suspense, the dramatic music, the whole nine yards
Do you sometimes reminisce?
About our time together, our passionate love
And love's purest kiss?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LinzAy (64.12.97.8) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 11:03 am AW!!!! Made me smile the whole time i was reading it! |
| cute (24.72.92.94) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 01:03 am aww that is so cute |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 03:35 am I havent had my first kiss........but i hope it is just like you described it. Great poem! |
| luc (68.74.66.84) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 03:37 am you always make the most beautiful poems.. i envy you for that.. :P i loved the poe.. like linzay said.. it had me smiling from the begining.. :) good work pam.. keep on writing.. |
| Pamela (194.125.159.212) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 02:53 pm Thanks for the feedback guys - this really is the way I felt. And it is as clear as day in my mind, even now, years later. Thanks for understanding the poem and I also hope that everyone's first kiss is this wonderful. |
| bianca (206.254.163.110) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 08:03 pm I think that it was one of the best poems i have ever read |
| nakita (206.254.163.110) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 08:04 pm great |
| Pamela (194.125.159.211) -- Saturday, May 17 2003, 06:43 pm Wow is right because I certainly didn't expect so many people to absorb this poem the way you guys have. Everybody deserves a movie kiss....... |
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