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I Vs. I
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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I am my own opposition
A contender against myself
Swinging wildly
Bruising easily
Nobody else in the ring
Just me and my silent agony

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Comments on this poem/writing:

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 07:21 pm

confused

i confused but lovely poem
LinzAy (152.163.189.233) -- Monday, March 10 2003, 06:39 am

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woa! ao short but so awesome!
Xeracy (204.113.161.186) -- Tuesday, March 11 2003, 10:12 pm

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I don't know if you've read/seen it, but this poem reminds of "Fight Club". I love your poem. Sometimes the fights with ourselves leave us hurt even more than our fights with other people.
Pamela (159.134.136.209) -- Wednesday, March 12 2003, 12:01 am

Thanks :o)

I am glad this little blip brought some reaction from the readers ;O) And yes, I did see the movie Fight Club and I never noticed it but you are right, very parallel ideas........
It is a confusing poem, but thats the intention because I am confused about myself in it.
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