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I-n-v-i-n-c-i-b-l-e
4 February, 2003
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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I am
N ot weak or passive, but rather
V ulnerable
I n a world so focused on power
N obody
C an take anybody else seriously
I am
B eautiful to someone, somewhere
L iving......
E volving......

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Martin Vann (67.75.182.28) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 04:48 pm

Such sensitive strength you have

Words from a kind, yet realistic heart. Yes you are beautiful, very much so, I see you in your presentation. I feel a moment was taken here, to smell the roses and shake one's own hand. Its good to be alive when you feel like this.

Thank You!
I'm a big fan of yours,
Martin V.
Pamela (66.38.146.177) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 07:15 pm

Thank You!

Np Martin, thank you for your kind words :O) I think we all would appreciate ourselves a little more if we just took the time to contemplate our good characteristics instead of the bad.
 
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