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Close Your Eyes
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Close your eyes and use your other senses for just a moment.....
Can you feel the wind on your back?
It's like thousands of little spiders crawling up and down your spine.

Can you hear the echoes of distant voices?
They venture like lost souls in the darkness.

Can you feel the suspense hanging in the air?
It's like standing on the edge of a rickety bridge.

Can you hear the wind chimes ringing?
They are the voices of angels singing.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

alicia meredith (80.192.37.87) -- Tuesday, February 4 2003, 05:18 pm

close your eyes , you can feel it

i think its a very sad poeming but i think its very true because you can hear the angel's singing and everything is butiful in heaven or where ever that place is .
Pam O'Brien (208.191.142.46) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 01:09 pm

Wonderful Poem

Wonderful writing, and I like your name too!
ROY (152.163.188.198) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 05:39 pm

Pretty at the edge of life

I liked it very well
 
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