L-o-n-e-l-i-n-e-s-s
1 November, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien
| Love unrequited Only you No longer together Emptiness too Love unrequited In love with you No longer together Emptiness too Saddened by loss Spirit is lost |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| LUC (67.37.184.125) -- Monday, December 2 2002, 10:54 pm wow never really seen those types of poems in a long while. though something about it makes it diffrent from the others. maybe the fact that it isnt 'L is for...' or its the first time i've seen that topic in that form. its unique. ^.^ |
| Pamela (66.38.146.184) -- Tuesday, December 3 2002, 01:02 am You know, I was totally surprised by myself when I wrote this one too! I think its unique and I am so glad that someone else does too :o) Besides, those words really summed up my feelings of loneliness..... |
| Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Tuesday, December 3 2002, 10:25 am What a clever way to write a poem - good words too! |
| THE freak (64.12.104.37) -- Sunday, February 2 2003, 01:51 am great job! i like it |
| little miss chris (207.74.72.130) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 04:26 pm that is how i feel about many things that are hapaning to me right now in my life |
| scorpio (67.210.194.5) -- Thursday, February 20 2003, 02:33 am that is a very good down to the point poem it is sad to be lonely trust me i know i am going through it right now!!!*{BIG UPS TO YOU GIRL BE STRONG}* |
| KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 05:22 am GREAT! I just wrote one kind of like that, same format, different word, but I think we all feel the same with what we write. Nice work Pamela! |
| Pamela (194.125.159.197) -- Thursday, July 17 2003, 07:31 pm Thanks! I can't believe someone actually read this older poem AND took the time to comment! |
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