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Sometimes Simplicity Soothes The Soul
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Sometime in the middle of last week,
I decided to allow my subconscience to speak.

Sometime between now and yesterday,
I threw all my inhibitions away.

Sometime in the past few minutes,
I took a moment to treasure my life and all thats in it.

Sometime just a few seconds ago,
I closed my eyes and listened to my blood flow.

Sometime since the first line of this poem,
I lost track of where my train of thought was goin...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.184.125) -- Monday, December 2 2002, 09:51 pm

nice

i liked it. the last two lines really cought my attention.
Pamela (66.38.146.184) -- Tuesday, December 3 2002, 12:03 am

Last Two Lines

I noticed that you always comment on the last few lines and I like that - I think an extremely effective poem has a BANG ending that leaves the reader thinking for a few minutes you know? So it means alot to hear you say that the last few lines caught your attention.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Tuesday, December 3 2002, 09:22 am

I agree

Agood poem Pam and I agree about the last 2 lines - agood ending makes you remember a poem
 
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