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A Fool As Usual
7 October, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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How can you be so casual?
Didn't we share something sensual?
Your excuses just aren't feesible,
And me, I'm just a fool as usual

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.123.56.232) -- Saturday, November 9 2002, 01:10 am

passion

You know what I've noticed all the people on here are passionate. the writings are good and this just goes to proove it.
Pamela (66.38.146.88) -- Saturday, November 9 2002, 08:32 am

Surprised

I actually thought everybody would dismiss this one. Not really a poem so much as a thought on life.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Saturday, November 9 2002, 10:46 pm

Thoughts

Thoughts on life it may be but still written in a very poetic way.I like your thoughts!!
barb (206.191.91.140) -- Sunday, November 10 2002, 02:51 am

thoughts

pam there is nothing wrong with thoughts.I do that all the time. Ha Ha very good thinking
Pamela (66.38.146.88) -- Sunday, November 10 2002, 03:33 am

I was thinking....

LOL, I actually was thinking to myself that his casual attitude towards me after all the intimate moments we shared was not appropriate. And that his reasons were not good enough and I was a fool for believing him.
So I put it into words that rhymed and voo-walah!
 
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