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Jigsaw
3 November, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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I've noticed that my life resembles a jigsaw puzzle,
Sometimes I cannot find all the pieces,
And when I do, I am not exactly sure where they all fit.
And then as I attempt to bring it all together,
I lose some in the shuffle and I am back to square one.
If I knew where the instructions were I would read them. ..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.178.61) -- Monday, November 4 2002, 05:05 am

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ya know sometimes i wish when we are all born, someone would hand us a booklet on how to survive life. how to knw what to say at the right times and so forth. sadly though we dont. so we always find our selves struggling. great poem. o.0 :)
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Monday, November 4 2002, 10:39 am

I like it !

I do like your poem, it's short but every word held so much meaning for me.All our lives are a like puzzle - glad I'm not the only one whose sometimes in a muddle!
Pamela (216.18.45.115) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 02:08 am

Bright Side

I guess I can say that on the bright side of things - sometimes all you need is a little help from a friend to finish a jigsaw puzzle :O) Maybe that goes for life as well.....
Luc (65.43.115.59) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 02:54 am

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as much as i want to agree with you pamela , may i call you that oh well tolate ^.^, well i doubt that can go for life as well. why you may wonder, dun know i just feel it, true it may help for a jigsaw puzzle but not life, lifes a totattly diffrent subject/catagory. though i think it might just work out for others though like i said before and i'll saw it again i doubt it. o.0 wollipop?
Pamela (66.38.146.88) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 04:49 am

Oh well

A girl can hope. Ignorance is bliss. I guess comparing life to a jigsaw puzzle is kinda silly isn't it? LOL
anonymous (65.43.112.201) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 11:02 pm


no not really. well at least i dont think it is. why should it be. it did sound like i was saying that in the last post didnt it. didnt mean to make it like that. in fact dont really remember why i posted that. and yeah ignorance is bliss ^.^ :P
Luc (65.43.112.201) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 11:04 pm

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that was me just incase you were wondering.
 
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