The Last Laugh
Author: Pamela O'Brien


I am not one of the geese forming a V in the sky,
I'm the one that never learned to fly.

While their wings stir a heavy beat,
I walk on land, with steady feet.

And then with the Storm coming from the North,
The majority will lose its course.

And I who stood alone for years,
Will watch them as they're shedding tears.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc ( -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 03:58 am


quack? i like that last 2 line. "and i who stood alone for years, will watch them as they're shedding tears." ma fav part. ^.^
Pamela ( -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 04:48 pm


Isn't it true though? I find that I am lonesome a lot of the time, but I also find more happiness because I rely on myself instead of others. Thought you would like this one :O)
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