Rainy Days
17 June, 2002
Author: Pamela O'Brien
The rain is not bad weather,
Its a blessing from the sky,
Little drops of hope,
>From the heaven's cry.
I hear the pitter-patter,
So I open up my eyes,
And there I see a rainbow,
Much to my surprise.
Feel the damp beneath your feet,
Thats the texture of our lives,
Where one turns to doubt,
Its the other that survives.
At the end of every rainbow,
There is no pot of gold,
But apparantly theres happiness,
Or so I'm told.
Miracles come in many forms,
In many different ways,
But I've never felt so thankful,
As on those rainy days.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Kelly Shannon (12.221.12.144) -- Monday, November 4 2002, 09:52 pm THAT WAS BEUTIFUL!!! |
| Mac Eric (12.221.12.144) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 01:23 am it would be better if it had true Irish things in it. |
| Talor Macmillan (12.221.12.144) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 01:33 am i don't think that Mac Eric is right it was beutiful like the kelly shannon girl said. Keep on writing those cool poems |
| Rae goodman (12.221.12.144) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 01:37 am it was ok i guess it should be wild yet tame and stong but weak and cool yet hot like on fire. Rae G. |
| Matt J. (12.221.12.144) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 01:43 am it was tight i toldly got u i an't much of a speller but i do know my poems and this one rockes like me.hee hee |
| Pamela (216.18.45.115) -- Tuesday, November 5 2002, 02:05 am This poem has been on this site for almost a year and nobody ever commented on it until now - and I guess when it rains, it pours eh? As for the true Irish thing Mac, I guess my heritage only comes out when it wants too.... Thanks for the compliments guys! |
| natalie palacio (66.122.61.163) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 03:22 am I thought the poem went smoothly well, it all ties together. |
| Pamela (66.38.146.177) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 09:49 pm Thanks Natalie! Nice to know that even the old ones still get read every now and then.... |
| Martin Vann (67.28.94.109) -- Tuesday, February 11 2003, 04:46 pm I'm fairly, new to the dreamersreality group, still learning my way around and learing how to say what I feel when I read the work of others. I have discovered that there are hundreds of excellent poems on this site. Its like a treasure chest, you just have to dig a little to find the gold. If, I miss a poem and someone leaves an interesting comment about it, hey, that seems to bring the poem to life, its recovered. Happy to say I found this one, via the help of other's comments. Thanks, Pamela, its a very, good presentation! MartinV |
| Big Cock Cammy (204.83.16.121) -- Wednesday, June 4 2003, 03:13 am errr dat was coo. I am from da natice tribes up north in saskatchewan |
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