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I Want To Dance With You
Author: Pondering Red

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i want to dance with you.
maybe we don't always talk so well
and
maybe my expression does not always
reach you
the way I would like it to
and
maybe your fervent conversation
does not always send the response
or actions back
that you would wish it to
but
hey baby
i love to dance with you.

and
when we dip and dive
into the air
and swing our hips
and jive
without a care,
i feel your words
and mine flying
to the right places.

we fit so well.
you are the perfect partner-
right height
right swing.
you catch me
before i can fall.
you swirl me
before i spin too much.
our hands clasp
at just the right moments.
you compliment me.
so maybe
we don't always talk so well
but hey baby
I love to dance with you !!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.225.130.57) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 06:08 pm

Dance The Night Away

Awesome Red, just awesome. As good as usual I must say :o)
I agree with the concept that dancing speak a language of its own.....
Martin Vann (171.75.207.184) -- Wednesday, October 22 2003, 09:08 pm

One Mid-Night After-Noon..., we danced

Pondering Red;

The Sun and the Moon, met on one Mid-Night afternoon, the stars, clouds and all the rainbows, gathered round, they knew, something special, was about to happen soon.

Then it did, you and I, the Sun and the Moon, danced all that, mid-night after-noon. The stars, clouds and rainbows, were the audience, and when we felt we were, all wore out, hey, they pleaded, please, dance for us once more. Next thing you know, some thunder bolts joined in, my what a time we had, I love to dance, with Pondering Red!

I have always admired your toughts and heart, Pondering Red.

Thanks once again.
MartinV
Pondering Red (65.94.133.60) -- Wednesday, October 29 2003, 06:34 pm

thank you

Pamela and Martin V...thank you both so much for your comments....I appreciate your feedback,as well as both your ongoing contributions of poetry...
 
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