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The Light Of Tao
Author: Pondering Red

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Deep within some moments
of this past year-
I do remember
lights of consciousness,
flowing,sometimes exploding
from a simple second to another-
suspending time into timelessness

if I could have captured
these moments with you,
I would remember
an almost perfect love
without the darkness
of jealousy and obsession
that turns into circles of pain and fear

We would have traveled in a balance eternal
bending like tall grass, not resisting
being free, letting each other be
whether together or alone
it is the same- and such a shame
that we could not see the light of Tao

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (194.125.159.145) -- Thursday, June 12 2003, 05:37 pm

Holy Crap.....

Such brilliant words for such brilliant emotions.I can't comprehend how you capture moments so well.
Pondering Red (65.94.131.188) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 09:54 pm

thanks

Thanks so much..I appreciate your comments..so cool..truly...your words do inspire me
 
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