The Full Moon
Author: Pondering Red
in the time of one full moon
i was hooked
a lustful connection
golden hair glowed
strands streamed to heaven
you sang the right songs
blue guitar deep voice
charmed raspy sexy
armed with poetry
we danced dined drank many wines
and played alot
talked laughed till pain made us stop
you came with smiling
beguiling pointed blue eyes
i smiled and giggled
the ecstacy of it all
i was falling
now we may part
so much so little
all under the time of a full moon
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Red Dragon (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 10:56 am|
Hi. I have a poem bearing the same title...and it goes pretty much the same.Nice work...
|Pondering Red (22.214.171.124) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 03:59 pm|
Yes, I enjoy your poem...descriptive...a nice flow of words...inspired by nature and experience..great !
|RED DraGon (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 11:37 am|
i know its impolite but i ask in sheer innocence: Mind telling me your age?....
|Martin Vann (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 03:10 pm|
Would you happen to have directions for getting under this full moon? Is it in my heart, my sprit, or do you keep the directions for its location to yourself? wouln't blame you if you did, I enjoyed every word you wrote now, where is this Full Moon of which you spoke?
|CrYsTal (184.108.40.206) -- Saturday, April 5 2003, 08:06 pm|
I really enjoyed this poem, it had a half sense of nature and the other half was like soul's desire. Keep writing, I really did enjoy it!
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