Wrapped Around Love
Author: Pondering Red


a knock on the door
you appeared out of the blue veil
that you had wrapped youself in
and i started to go out of my mind
you looked good..very good..
all wrapped up in a large wool sweater
hair..all shiny black
and hanging tied, yet loose
and your body movements..sleek
almost elegant..yet a little bit clumsy at times
i was shocked
not sure what i felt
joy and happiness, relief,and the anger
subsided for that moment

we talked, i rambled on more than you,
yet, amidst the silent moments
an intense tender look from you..
and i was in a place with no space and time
that i knew of
a time of wonderful comfort
such as i had known with you
yet, now, even in this strange circumstance,
i felt a sudden peace...a profound relaxation
all was well in my world

your words, your gestures, your touches
flew to my heart and soul and i melted
into a state beyond a really good meditation
and so, this night we wrapped around each other
eyes smiling love,skin upon skin, yours hot like fire
burning..arms grasping for words grasping for forgiveness
and so, many hours in this warm retreat
and then i knew you had to go,
my hands and heart still burning love
wondering, waiting....
waiting and wanting you !!!!!!!!!!


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webster ( -- Wednesday, December 1 2004, 02:32 pm


When reading your poem, I couldn't breathe, afraid to miss the next line.
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