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I Hate The Way
24 September, 2002
Author: Rachael

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I hate the way you look at me,
I hate the way you stare,
I hate the way you don't love me,
You don't even care,
I hate the way you talk to me,
I hate to hear your voice,
I hate the way that I still love you,
I don't have a choice,
I hate the way your dress each day,
I hate the way you do your hair,
I hate the way you walk away,
Your never really there,
I hate the way I love you,
I hate the way I care,
I hate the way I live my life,
Wishing you were there,
I hate the way I need you,
I hate the way I pray,
I hate the way I cry at night,
And each and every day,
I hate the way I don't hate you,
I hate that its not even close,
I hate that you are the one,
That I love the most

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.38.146.63) -- Thursday, September 26 2002, 12:38 am

I Hate the Way This Poem Reflects Me

I hate the way I read this poem, and it reminds me of the way I hate loving him. I hate the way I don't hate this poem, because it says everything I won't.
Leah (152.163.188.227) -- Saturday, September 28 2002, 10:35 pm

I hate the way I love this poem

this is a very good poem and i love it. it kinda reminds me of how i feel about this one person. this is good and you obviously have some talent.
Babygurl (216.135.36.194) -- Wednesday, November 13 2002, 05:26 am

whoa!!!!

This poem is really good. It reminds me so much of my ex-boyfriend, I hate the way no matter what happens I will always love him. Keep writing girl!!
Jamilla (24.189.62.241) -- Thursday, November 14 2002, 07:38 pm

diz iz off da hook!

ayo i like ya poem it really remindz meh ah va aloota thangz anywayz dont let dem chickz hate on u also juz keep writtin cuz dey cant knocc da hustle...
anonymous (207.70.160.30) -- Friday, November 22 2002, 02:42 pm


this is the poem from "10 things i hate about you"
anonymous (12.30.227.212) -- Thursday, January 2 2003, 05:52 am


no actually its not thats what i thought but its not
Brianne (24.138.51.184) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 12:43 am


I love this poem!! It explains everything i think about the guy I love. I thought no one else had ever felt this way....but I guess they do....
Alexis (216.114.172.140) -- Tuesday, January 14 2003, 11:11 pm

Perfecto

This poem is so good, you have so much talent. I was just sitting here and crying reading it, cause I have so much shit going on right now, and this is how this one guy is treating me. This is the SHIZ!
Martin Vann (65.56.172.232) -- Wednesday, January 15 2003, 12:40 am

Gee, What a jerk, but

He, must be doing something right, or perhaps, its what he offers, Wow, this you must decide for yourself.Is it what he does right, or what he can offer, this you must decide. I assume you are like the rest of us mortals, we have but one life to live or give or "share," you have an option, which one, fits, the true, you? I liked your revealtion very much, you truly, bear your sole to us, but what about yourself, are you being just as true? I think you have some thoughts, about which direction, you should take. If, I'm right then this I say to you. "To yourself, you must be true! What will be that cost if you stay, or face another truth and move away? Not my call, its up to you.

You expression is from your heart, perhaps, you did not intend to tell us so much about yourself, but you did now "we" reply, because "WE" care!
Rachael .A (24.147.249.120) -- Monday, January 20 2003, 09:13 pm

wow!!

wow!! we spell our names the same!! your like the first person i herd of spelling it with 2 A's except for mee...lol yeaa well anyways if yea wanna talk my sn is (snip: no addresses). i like your poem!
La Shorty (205.188.209.170) -- Sunday, January 26 2003, 08:34 am

"Lovely"

I love this poem because it reminds me about someone i really love alot.
Oktariina (80.235.34.51) -- Saturday, April 26 2003, 12:02 pm

Nice~~

~This one reminds me of the poem from "10 things I hate about you"... But it is very very nice, touching.. and reflects everything I think about. Well done - you have the talent to put emotions into words. Keep writing. :)
anonymous (195.93.34.12) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 09:38 pm

no title

This is bad...! this keep wriring gyal you done a gr8 job
Josh (68.114.237.216) -- Friday, June 6 2003, 02:53 am

Good Job

I want to cry about it...it reflects me...i'm a bi...and i love someone dearly but he doesn't know..Thanks a lot for this poem
True Poet (24.243.249.118) -- Wednesday, June 18 2003, 02:25 am

Nice Try

I have to disagree but i do not like this poem is it just like "10 things i Hate about you" Sorry to say but next time dont take a poem and reword it but take it and make it inspire you to write better. But never reword a poem and call it origanl. Rachel here is a tip. Find something you love or hate and right about that not some thing you already hear can call it your own! Sorry!
~True Poet~
booya1500 (24.162.61.83) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 10:58 pm

MY GOSH IT RELFECTS ME

the poem is off of the 10 things i hate about you!!
my boyfriend broke up with me yesterday. and i hate him because he dump me 4 another girl. i really want him back but i am to pi## off at him
booya1500 (24.162.61.83) -- Friday, October 10 2003, 11:10 pm

MY GOSH IT RELFECTS ME

the poem is off of the 10 things i hate about you!!
my boyfriend broke up with me yesterday. and i hate him because he dump me 4 another girl. i really want him back but i am to pi## off at him
LinzAy (65.40.22.241) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 12:26 am

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This is an awesome poem!!!! Perfect flow! And perfect description of what's going on in my life..
 
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