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Addicted To You
Author: Ramona Nelson

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Im addicted to you
You know its true
I cant stay away
Not even for a day

Baby I luv u
Baby I need u
Why don't u see
My luv is naturally

Im addicted to u
But whut bout me?
Don't we share these feelings?
Or am I not appealing

Baby I luv u
Baby I need u
Why don't u see
My luv is naturally

Im addicted to you
Cant let go, its true
Baby don't leave
The hurt will be to deep

Baby I luv u
Baby I need u
Why don't u see
My luv is naturally
Now my baby's gone
And my life is to
U were my meaning
For being and living
Baby I luved u
Baby I needed u
But uve gone away
And took my life with u

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.112.213) -- Sunday, April 20 2003, 05:21 am

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kind of reminded me of a song.. its like and i like the repitition of baby i luve you baby i need you.. then at the end how its all turned to past tense.. nice..
megan (65.60.159.210) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 02:02 am

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hey gurl! whats up its an really nice poem and it sounds like it could be made into a song! lol! we will be bffl! i luv ya!
~meg~
anonymous (208.254.109.28) -- Wednesday, December 10 2003, 04:32 pm

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great poem. i know where youre coming from w/ this poem
 
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