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A Poem For You
27 April, 2003
Author: Red Dragon (Bernz)

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Tonight, staring at the ceiling
I hear nothing, but my memories and dreams
My mind is sailing, above me hardly
I notice the dust and cobwebs floating
That occupy this once white washed wood.

Tick tock tick tock, says the clock
Telling me the indefinite figures I long
My eyes are tired the way my mind is
My being, I guess is also tired of being alone

Outside stars twinkle, but what could they give
They only are an adornment on the blank Night sky,
Vast and unending, like a midnight journey into the woods
The journey inside me that has taken me in all directions.
Like moonbeams painting the silent roofs

And more silence eats the time like amoeba.
Staring until the blink becomes tears
I succumb to the comfort of my pillows
Which are insensitive to my sorrows
Perhaps the bed too, if it could only complain
Is sick and feed-up carrying my weight
The way the load on my brain and heart
Has nailed me to the daily rituals of work and sleep

You who read this may know of the uphill climb I am facing
Partly, perhaps, yes but you can only nod in silence
I don't know how far I can go
And if you have been to where I am going
Or perhaps you have touched even the tip of the soft angel's wing
Here I offer my hand with palm opened to battle the dwindling hope
Would you take my hand and lead me with care?
Would you even whisper and say: "Hold on, I'll take you there"?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 03:43 am

This is great work!

Ruby,
I really like this one. It is so dreamy and sweet. Nice job!
Dino Hi.5-0 (67.26.88.117) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 05:53 am

Great piece of work RD

Man! You can really write a poem brah! To write a poem like this, you have to feel that you hit the bottom of a barrel. Now the climb out of it, can be long or short. I must say I have been there and now a memory. It was a long climb of sorrows, laying there at night. I occupied my time with sports and playing music. Then someone speciel came into my life again. Nice work, you've touch my inner mind of remembrance. Keep climbing brah!
RubyDragon (213.249.157.106) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 03:43 pm

Amazing writing once again.

I feel your emotions, I sense your pain.
You can reach the top, I did, but be careful
because once I got there I fell. You can make it.
When you do help me back up.
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 01:07 am

Shit!

i did it again! I ment R.D. not ruby thats the second time i have mixed up names today! So very sorry!
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 09:19 am

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Leah: its okay...Ruby and I are brothers anyway...right Ruby? :>
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 09:20 am

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Dino: I'm glad you liked this...Now i feel the purpose within me: I'm starting to affect others, one way or the other
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 09:21 am

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Ruby: I promise...
Roy (205.188.208.103) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 11:26 am

Brilliant/a gem of poetry

I go thru a lot of pillow cases and my bed looks like a swayback down-trodden horse. This hit the top Ten this week in my book! Thanks
Red Dragon (210.14.4.46) -- Wednesday, April 30 2003, 11:46 am

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Glad to hear that this poem made it to your top ten list Roy. But do you actually monitor and keep a record every now and then? That's so clever man....cool even
RubyDragon (213.249.157.106) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 11:34 am

Yes and Yes

Yes I monitor every two to four days, depending on certain things. and yes we're brothers!!
Roy (152.163.189.100) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 12:37 pm

Right ON!

Red is still on the chart right up there all week and Ruby thanks for helping me monitor brother. But,we gotta keep on top of it cause I some sense other poetry coming RB/D?
Red Dragon (210.14.4.46) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 04:20 pm

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I'm totally lost...Ruby, how you get to answer my questions to Roy?I'm sensing sumthin diffrent....hehehhe...dont wori nuthin bad tho....wats ur email add Ruby?
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Tuesday, September 16 2003, 06:55 am

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What were you going through red dragon? if you want some 1 to take u through it ask God.......
 
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