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22 March, 2003
Author: Red Dragon (Bernz)

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Like a child lulled
To sleep
I hear you speak
Intoning words
The resonance of kindness

A new song sung by a flute
Echoing in the mountains
So soft and melodic
So enchanting
that Only the ears
Of this weary pilgrim
Could decipher.

I heed the notes of your song
They are woven out from your longing,
Sentiments, cry for compassion.

I too, could sing along
The tune of your opus

Somehow our voices
Fused and the harmony
Seems like the sonata
Of two lost souls

The song speaks
Of the allure and foreboding
Air of our solitude.

Craving for what could be
Scribbled yet could not be spoken..

------- Author's Notes -------

(On the phone with G.on the second night)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (152.163.189.104) -- Thursday, March 27 2003, 10:21 pm

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You've got a beauitful heart R.D. And it shows through your beauitful poetry. I will always look forward to being touched by your words..for your words honestly touch every part of me....Keep your beautiful heart open and love is sure to fly in....slow or fast, as i feel it probably is rite now....
RedDragon (210.14.4.51) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 10:11 am

Thanks You for Your Kind Words

LinZay, thanks. I know that a poet like knows the language of poetry. Your writing reveals the same: kindness, beauty and svelt touch only a lady of emotions like you can scribble.Cheers!

Again, Thank you my friend!
LinzAy (152.163.188.226) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 08:13 pm

R.D.

Aw...thankyou R.D......friends in poetry are always the kindest and most heartfelt to make....anyway...can't wait for your next batch! heh heh
Martin Vann (63.208.62.34) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 09:33 pm

May your dream come true

R.D.

I like the words and the dreams she shares with you or, do you dream and makes up these words, then share them with yourself? I don't think the words are scribbled, just not fully, saying what should be said, by you or by her?

Think, I have again, confused myself, yet, it felt right when I said it, only you R.D., can tell.

You bet'cha, I like this work, want to go further with it, but was not sure of the correct direction.

Thanks, R.D., like many, you cause me to think!

MartinV
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Saturday, March 29 2003, 11:14 am

Behind The Poem...A Mystery

LinZay, as of this writing my latest writing is on its way to Dreamer's emailbox...i hope...

Martin V.
As to what I've said to LinZay are words that were sincerely crafted for her...heheheh...the dream? well...ugh! it remains to be a dream...

"You bet'cha, I like this work, want to go further with it, but was not sure of the correct direction."...Brother, there's always the mystery nehind the poetry....With regards to directions, think deep, reflect, and follow your heart....

Thanks my friends....Btw, I am from the Philippines, in case you want to know...hehehehe...
Red Dragon (210.14.4.46) -- Saturday, March 29 2003, 11:15 am

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Guys...sorry for the typo error above...forgive me as i was in a rush...to a date...hehehe...wish me luck
 
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