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Tears
Author: RubyDragon

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I have this feeling deep down inside
I've nowhere to go, nowhere to hide,
taking control it's tearing me apart
you gave it power when you broke my heart,

Come back and help me please
I knew love couldn't freeze,
stop the tears, take away the pain
I need you to return, before I go insane,

Never knowing you could do this to me
it struck me hard before I could flee,
losing my soul it gave me terror
my spirit is lost and possibly forever.

------- Author's Notes -------

This is the first ever poem I wrote five years ago, the one that inspired me to keep writing.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

CrYsTaL (216.63.217.252) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 05:11 pm

Welllllllllll.......

I say its a pretty great poem for a first timer. How did you get the inspiration to write to beautifully? Great poem-oops-I mean POETRY!!!!
LinzAy (64.12.96.13) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 10:15 pm

''''''

So much better than my first poem! Good one Ruby!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 11:11 pm

Ruby

Awsome ruby! Great start to poetry! No wonder you are such a wonderful writer!

Leah
Rubydragon (213.249.157.106) -- Friday, May 16 2003, 01:34 pm

Thanks

The inspiration was already there, I just kept writing and writing, and everything came pouring/flooding out.
RedDragon (210.14.4.51) -- Saturday, May 17 2003, 06:22 am

Nice

It brings memmries...poingnantly good
Jessica (10.147.14.94) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 05:02 pm

Hey

This is a beautiful peom i hope you continue to right great poems like this one!?!
Terrie* (65.148.212.2) -- Thursday, September 4 2003, 02:54 am

praise you on your first...

Ruby, excellent writing..poetry helps us unleash the inner feelings we want to share or communicate with others....an expression with-out hiding..a tour of ones inner soul...it brings us comfort to write and read ones own..as well as others...keep up with the great art of your poetry....and keep on posting them... thanx for sharing...Terrie
 
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