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Memories In The Rain
Author: RubyDragon

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When I feel What I feel
what else can you do?
my blood runs straight to my head
and I think I'm finally through,
I spent all my time loving your heart
now I'm lost and don't know where to start,

it's been so long since I've seen your face
someone else has hurt me too,
I cry myself to sleep every night
because I'm lost without you,
why wont you hear my cries and see my tears falling
dont you listen the wind calling,

staring into the moonlight
wishing you were here at my side,
keeping me warm on lonely cold evenings
so many times I've tried,
I've had enough of all this hurt and angry strain,
and lonely tears and memories in the rain.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 12:12 am

Wow!

This poem sounds so painful! And i would like to tell you that i can feel your pain but i cant. Awsome poem from and awsome writer.
Roy (64.12.96.8) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 02:48 am

That dang emptiness

I is painful! I agree with every word Leah said! Please write another song of words we're here
LinzAy (205.188.208.8) -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 03:46 am

''''''

Nice writing Ruby!
brandy (65.6.103.206) -- Thursday, September 2 2004, 01:41 am

love it

ur poem is awsome
 
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