What have you done to me?
I will never really know,
as I remember the time
when the tears used to flow,
I felt so much hurt and pain
that's all blown away,
so did my words and evil thoughts
left with nothing more to say,
getting lost in your eyes
the never-ending pools of light,
filled with the beauty of all the stars
taken from the sky at night,
Don't ever leave me
I need you right there,
you have destroyed my pain and anger
but left me with one more fear!
Comments on this poem/writing:
|LinzAy (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 12:50 pm|
This is really really good! Yes, pain can turn into love. Interesting how that all works out! Don't ya think?
|Red Dragon (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:22 pm|
well, they come and they go...bad thing is...they go away with a piece of us with them....hehehhe...true and it hurts...a lot...but think anbout..we are all bound to be alone until the time we face our creator...to the grave we are all alone...dont be afraid brother....
|Mandy Kana (126.96.36.199) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:57 pm|
hey, this is good! but its better to love and lose than to never love at all.
|Crystal (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 09:27 pm|
Words cannot explain how much I like this poem, Great job Ruby D. I mean really good job!
|Nicole (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 11:01 pm|
That is one of my favorit poems that i have heard. it's really good. for me it's like i love someone and they took all the pain and anger away and always make me laugh,and i hate it when there gone. i dont ever want them to leave,cause its liek thats the only thing im holding on to...
|guadalupe (220.127.116.11) -- Sunday, February 1 2004, 12:55 am|
i think this is a good poem .even though i am just 14 i get it.
|Meridian (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 07:06 pm|
Ruby, man, "Don't Go", reminded me of an algebraic expression, or equation! It reminds me of a reciprocal, because your words are so powerful, that it's unexplainable, but on the other side, it's comprehendable too! LOL!
Great job R.D.
|Meridian (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 07:08 pm|
When I say unexplainable, I mean that I can't explain how much value your poem holds, it's that good! And comprehendable, well, you know, I understand you sincerely!
Nice work again bud!
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