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Calling Darkness
16 April, 2003
Author: RubyDragon

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Night flies across the sky
and the full moon rises above the sea,
my heart beats full of love and devotion
this time I know I can be free,
as the wind whistles throught the air
I hear your voice whisper "I care",

I think of you everyday
I dream of you every night,
when the darkness takes my spirit
it's your beauty that shines a light,
as the hatred fills my shattered soul
it's your love that takes control,

When the light gets dark over the land
and upon my neck I feel its icy breath,
from deep in the forest there is a calling
that tells me life is a dream of death,
when I awake you'll be there
you are my everything and with me everywhere

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (205.188.208.75) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:51 pm

''''''

Aw!
Nice poem Ruby!
Red Dragon (210.14.4.46) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:24 pm

~..~

the last line is a hit...that's right dont lose hope man...life gets better when you hope...
Roy (152.163.188.229) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 06:31 pm

Amazing Love

touches the things we must know to be true blue
luc (68.74.127.159) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 09:01 pm

lovely

beautifully written.. good poem..
Crystal (204.32.64.150) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 10:38 pm

LOVEly!

Really liked the way you grasped the life of someones reality, couldn't ask for more. Great POEm!(Hint:Edgar Allan Poe)Sorry if it sounds dorky!
Roy (64.12.96.106) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 01:33 am

much much

ever special words to hear Ruby Dragon
great great and great in my mind
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, September 11 2003, 03:19 am

speechless

all i can say is wow!
 
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