Feel the power that surrounds my soul
the pain and heartache take control,
you hurt me so much without even knowing
but there is only one way that it is showing,
read all I write, feel all my love and see all I see
you know you will want to cry when you reach into me,
You will know me more than anyone could
I can love forever and you know I would,
for you are with me for eternity and longer
being with you crushes my pain and makes me stronger,
I never want to lose you when I hold you tight
you make my soul take wind and fly into the night,
The feeling of freedom when I'm with you
proves my love is completely true,
so be with me till the end of the beginning
my pain is going and I am winning,
you are the only one my heart can defend
so love me when the beginning is the end!
Comments on this poem/writing:
|LinzAy (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 12:59 pm|
Good writing Ruby!!
Has a beautiful flow to it.
|Roy (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 05:26 pm|
true feelings make words for ears to hear.
|Red Dragon (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 12:19 pm|
the last two lines are striking....this person must be so precious.a dedication inscribed in words...justified by the author's sincere intent.
|Leah06 (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, September 11 2003, 02:20 am|
this one is also amazing! Im glad you found her! She must be a great person to make you feel this way about her! Great poem!
|Terrie* (22.214.171.124) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 11:30 pm|
R.D, this is ...excellent...i can feel the passion in this ,the person this is intended for is very...very....fortunate...indeed...your tour was explicit..so refreshing to read such great creations..
|Martin Vann (126.96.36.199) -- Sunday, September 14 2003, 04:22 pm|
Sorry, I'm rushed for time, got a CPA heade this way, taxes coming up, however...,
Love it, like, write some about this thing called love, we will read it, you know lots about so, it appears.
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