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To Please
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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The words I hear cannot be for me,
You're so kind in many ways,
Never have I been told so kind,
To thank you could never be enough,
So for now I'll continue to write,
>From my heart that sometimes betrays,
Overriding my head always wanting more,
My life has become so many words,
Stories to share between you and me,
If you'll keep me close I'll always share,
To hold me near as we end another day,
You hold me so loving,
You're words said with feeling,
Wish I could share this joy,
Wish I could take away you're pains,
For this moment will pass,
With me you'll share tears of sadness also with Joy,
Always you return to me in that loving way,
I'll be here waiting and try to please.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.4.198) -- Friday, April 9 2004, 03:19 pm

Beautiful

You write with so much beauty, as I have said before.
Your writing holds a beauty that is rare. This is a beautiful poem......
Meridian (64.12.116.201) -- Friday, April 9 2004, 05:43 pm

Love

To be loved is a wonderful feeling isn't it Clive?
I sense the love connection between two adorable human beings! You must be excited Clive, to share this wonderful experience with that special someone!
Congrats Clive!

Lovely poem!

Meridian
Terrie* (65.148.214.22) -- Saturday, April 10 2004, 02:21 pm

Clive,

this was totally lovely...loved it as well!! thanx for sharing Terrie *
Terrie* (65.148.211.97) -- Sunday, May 9 2004, 04:02 am

Clive,

this is sooo beautiful but sad...i just got thru readin' on many of your poetry i never gave myself a chance to comment on..they are all very touching and heart tugging tear jerkers. you write so well ,so much love in your heart..keep them flowing dear..i'm enjoyin' each and everyone.Terrie*
 
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