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Restless Heart
8 April, 2004
Author: Moonstarshine

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A night of silence
restless, my soul
deep in the abyss
rages a storm..
Take my hand
oh! blowing winds
away from these
thundering..
rains of pain.
Gather the
gentelness
of my being,
lead me to a quiet
shelter..
for only in solitude
this heart would find
what it yearns for..
complete inner peace
and calm from
within.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.206) -- Friday, April 9 2004, 06:49 pm

Shakespeare

Hey Moonstarshine! You're waaaaaaaaaay better than Shakespeare! Your poems capture one's eye! With the word usage; it all comes alive! You can see the storm take place, and someone tossing and turning from a "Restless Heart"!! This is interesting and fascinating! Keep those lovely poems coming!!

Meridian
Princess Moon (206.214.66.33) -- Friday, April 9 2004, 07:14 pm

WOW! You Go Moonstarshine

Man, i loved that poem something fierce. Man, you can write, I just love your poetry. This poem really got me thinking and interpreting the restless heart so described. I mean, I agree with Merdian, you can actually see the tossing and turning fo the Restless heart ya know! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading! You do awesome masterpieces! lol~Princess Moon
Moonstarshine (203.81.208.115) -- Monday, April 12 2004, 08:32 am

Thank You

Meridian / Princess Moon,
Thank you for the appreciation .. I am honoured by the comparison as long as shakespeare does not toss in his grave and become restless!!! :)
Moonstarshine (203.81.208.115) -- Monday, April 12 2004, 08:32 am

Thank You

Meridian / Princess Moon,
Thank you for the appreciation .. I am honoured by the comparison as long as shakespeare does not toss in his grave and become restless!!! :)
 
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