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4 Months
Author: Ryan

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the 4 best months of my life
ened with one little fight
a missed letter in one little screenname
you dont even wana be friends wont even say my name
but i guess i have no one to blame but myself
always thought i needed more help
but now your crying in the shower
you always thought u had more power
but i guess i have power more than u
the power to make u cry, the power to make u feel bad too
always loved you always will
even if were not friends ill love u till the end.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (67.28.88.80) -- Thursday, August 28 2003, 01:32 pm

Message Is Clear.

Ryan,
I would say you got your message across, very well. Now, if this other person will read it, hey, things might work out. Sounds like a sincere apology to me.

MartinV
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 11:28 pm

Ryan...

im sorry you lost your friend. Im here if you need to talk. Great poem!
Britany Underwood (192.168.101.231) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 03:45 pm

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You ae a real man if you can stick by a girl who has the nerve to do that
Britany Underwood (192.168.101.231) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 03:48 pm

Ryan

Great poem, sorry you have to go through that. I'm here for you. I've been there but believe me there is always someone who is going to love the fact that you will stick them no matter what.
Davey (205.188.113.184) -- Saturday, February 19 2005, 12:47 am

Know how you feel

I know exactly how you feel.But like ryan said if you give her that poem it might help cuz its from the heart. But if not then "time heals all wounds"
Gemma_13 (86.1.148.240) -- Sunday, October 30 2005, 07:31 pm

sorry

aww i rly lyk ya poem n kinda know how u feel cuz losing sum1 is hard spesh wen its ova summat stupid im here 2 talk if u eva wanna talk
Puddin 2 (208.63.114.185) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 07:45 pm

wow

wow i love that i went kinda through the same thing but it was after 7 months but i'm not guna get into that but it's great poem and ir sounds like u were REALLY in love with her so i wish u the best! o yea check out some of my poems they'll be up in the depression catagorie!
 
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