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My Story
5 March, 2003
Author: Ryan

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how will you know I'm hurting if you cannot see any pain?
to wear it on my skin tells what words cannot explain.
if i put them on my wrist you can read my story
u can read what i have wrote for you
it brings me somewhat glory
ill write u another letter on my leg
so you won't have to beg
for me to be in hell
you can already tell

so what im tellin you is
to read my story
im not just another suicidal teen

cause this is what I mean

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Comments on this poem/writing:

lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 06:30 pm

no you are not just another suicidal teen

your just going through alot and its to much pressure on your mind and you feel that way sometimes just keep your head and be strong.like aaliyah said "if at first you don't suceed dust your self off and try again" live your life to the fullest for you are not promise tommorow
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 12:25 am

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really im not going through rough times most of that is over with its just its easy for me to write about my past and suicide rather than right now and happy stuff it jus comes to me from my suicidal days but thank you anyways yall are so nice


ryan
lasohnda harris (12.229.199.53) -- Saturday, March 8 2003, 02:19 am

lol

well i just want you to be happy.
Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:14 am

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I'm sad that you have to think about suicide sorry but I know that your smart and you can make it through the troubles your going through by knowing alot of people love you and thinking about the people you care about well god bless you have a great day! or night....
ronnie young (204.100.220.2) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 09:42 pm

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you seem like a good writer
im not sucidal
i just hope the next day will be brighter.
i could feel the anger and pain
pretty soon it will drive me insain.
r.young (204.100.220.2) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 09:44 pm

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i understand how u feel because i feel the same way
 
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