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12 February, 2003
Author: Ryan

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i sit here bleedin but all u can think of is ur self
u dont care wheather i live or die
if feels like if i die the world out be a better place
i sit here bleedin do u care no
y should i care about u u dont care about me
u say u love me how do i know this is true
u said it urself that u couldnt go a day without lieing
u say stop cuttin when it feels so good
i dont really care what u think now its all over
-and maybe everything will be over soon
if i die would u care mayeb it would be better if u didnt answer
i thought i loved u but i guess i really didnt
i lied about loveing u cause i knew it would hurt u so much
-to let u knwo i didnt feel the same way
something a real gentleman would do anything
-in his power to not hurt the girl
so i said i did to make u happy and to not hurt u

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 11:19 pm


i wrote this about my ex stephanie thats how i felt when we broke up so i figured y not let people know how i felt
Erin (67.210.28.77) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 03:10 am


...::claps:: really really good. I loved it.
Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 05:29 am

what i think (Like it matters) lol

There will be people in our lives that hurt us and we have a right to be mad and its good to get our anger out but I think that you should forgive her even though she doesnt deserve it. If we dont heal the wounds of life that come our way than we will continue to bleed and that bleeding will affect us in ways we don't even know!
amber (205.188.208.71) -- Wednesday, April 9 2003, 04:45 am

the same world

the same world iguess were coming from were know one cares if we live or die all they think aboutis getting high but i dont blame them i would to God if you people only knew
Kirtie (209.172.205.117) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 02:13 am

i no wat u mean

that is exactly how i feel about my ex, zach, he said he cared and that he loved me,it was a load of crap. that was the first time i ever made a guy cry. keep up the good work!ยก!
Ashley Grier (67.30.82.54) -- Wednesday, May 14 2003, 04:35 am

Hey there , I think I know what you mean

I actually had an ex like that too he would say so much stuff and then he would say he cared but he never really did and we made promises to each other never to cut ourselves again but after me and him broke up we both broke the promises . In fact his name was Ryan
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Saturday, June 7 2003, 05:58 am

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that aint coo lol
Ashley Grier (67.75.225.122) -- Saturday, June 14 2003, 11:52 pm

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Yah me and him are still good friends though . I have stopped cutting ( well most of the time at least but when I am really stressed it's hard to resist ) well TTYL
Sanchez (152.163.253.71) -- Wednesday, July 23 2003, 08:09 am

I know what you felt

i had this ex boyfriend that i really loved always made me happy and smiling all the time ever sad with him cuz he always brought me joy....but i always told me that i love him and he told me that but at the end when he broke up with me.. he told me that he didnt mean it at all and my heart was brokin and hurtin all the time from it...from, there i juss wanted to stop breathin
 
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