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I Hate The Way
Author: Samantha

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I hate the way you look at her
I hate the way you sigh
I hate the way she takes your breathe away
Even if you just sigh

I hate the way you think she's everything
I hate the way you send "all my love"
with every single note
I hate the way you want her so bad
I hate the way it makes me cry

But most of all i hate the way i don't hate you
i will always love you
and that's about all!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Puddin 2 (208.63.114.185) -- Monday, March 13 2006, 07:48 pm

nice

i like that i didn't expect that ending.. i really like that! awesome poem!
Ing Twi Demalah (216.66.96.168) -- Friday, November 20 2015, 08:56 pm

Wow....

powerful, full of truly genuine emotion, I love how you captured the reality of the emotions felt. Excellent job!
 
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