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Jelly Beans Up My Nose
2 December, 2001
Author: Sami Finley

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John put jelly beans up his nose.
"Hey, John's cool.
Let's put jelly beans up our nose too".
I guess I learned my lesson
And I won't do it again.
Cause they got stuck up my nose,
and they won't come out.
Now I'm stuck in the hospital
cause of that.
I know why.
Cause I was Stupid

------- Author's Notes -------

Inspired by Jeff Moss's poem by the same name. The first two lines are quoted from his poem.
Sami was only 8 when she wrote her adaptation.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

David (198.246.4.68) -- Monday, September 23 2002, 04:57 pm


Ouch!!!
barb (206.191.91.12) -- Monday, September 30 2002, 03:16 am


now you know why parents say no to doing some things. very good writing about life experiences.
Danielle:0) (67.114.47.197) -- Monday, March 3 2003, 07:45 pm

Jellybeans up my nose!

I read this poem in 7th grade! It hillarious,
Martin Vann (63.208.43.132) -- Tuesday, March 4 2003, 09:57 pm

Never Challenge Children Or Animals, Why?

They will beat your BUTT every time! Jelley beans, I never did that, as I recall. However, I do remember, sticking one of my Mom's hair pens into a wall socket! Won't forget that, ever!

Sami, stick with Jelley Beans.

Funny poem, even if, it didn't rhyme, it made sense, more than some I have read. Of Course, I was probably, reading mine.

Good work, Sami!

MartinV
P.S.
Sami, does a Dolphin have a nose? Just wondered, thought that you might know.
barb (206.191.91.237) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 07:10 am

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Keep putting down memories and feelings ok
crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 11:55 pm

i luv it

I love your porm i loved that poem my ex best friend's little brother once got his blanky stuck up his nose and he had to go to the hospital! anyway i loved your creative poem!
shorty (205.188.208.140) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 11:30 pm

cool

that was an awsome poem keep on writing if you can
someone (198.81.26.74) -- Saturday, August 2 2003, 06:40 pm

sami

I think its a great poem.(snip) Sami your a great writer keep up the good work.
kacy (205.188.208.135) -- Tuesday, September 16 2003, 12:54 am

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i liked your peom keep it up
 
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