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The Giant
30 October, 2001
Author: Sami Finley

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Once upon a time there was a boy's mom that gave him a bar of soap and said go take a bath in the lake. He said "Okay mom" and she handed him the bar of soap.

His mom said "be careful of the giant and be back before dark cause that's when the giant comes out."

Well, he helped a bird to put a baby bird back in the nest. It was late when he took a bath. He took a bath and when he turned around there was a big foot print. And behind it was the giant. The boy ran as fast as he could.

He dropped his soap and it landed right in front of the giant's foot. He slipped in the lake and he drowned cause he didn't know how to swim.

------- Author's Notes -------

Sami is age 7

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Nicole Fritz (24.28.33.50) -- Friday, March 7 2003, 01:43 am

! A Sad Story!

This poem is great.But then at the end when the boy drowned, that wasn't so funny.Poor little boy!
Seizure (65.80.81.6) -- Tuesday, November 25 2003, 07:15 am

my belief

It is my belief the Giant is the one that died, not the kid.
 
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