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Sanctuary
Author: Sax

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I need to find sancuary.
I need to ask you for sanctuary.

I need to escape what plauges me.
I need to become blind for a moment.

I want it gone.
I need a place to hide,
I need a place,
so that what plagues me passes by,
looking for me elseware,
but haunting me no more.

Perhaps a tomb.
Yes yes,
a tomb,
a tomb.

If I cannot find a sanctuary,
if you cannot give me sanctuary,
if I cannot find a place to lay my head,
with anyone,
anywhere,
and I end up being locked out in the cold.

Then,
perhaps,
I'll find eternal sanctuary,
within that tomb over there.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.117.218) -- Tuesday, February 11 2003, 01:51 am

nice

i like a lot. the last. im a big fan of endings. obviously hehe and i like this one a lot too. you have good twist. i member one that really stuck to me. one about a kid having a dream in class or something then he fould something written in blood on his desk. i liked that one a lot ^.^ as much as this one. hehe..
MERIDIAN (64.12.116.202) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 11:56 pm

Yes, it's always good to refresh........

That's a good way to relief frustration and let go of aggravation. There couldn't have been a better poem.
Sax, such a nice start
 
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