I need to find sancuary.
I need to ask you for sanctuary.
I need to escape what plauges me.
I need to become blind for a moment.
I want it gone.
I need a place to hide,
I need a place,
so that what plagues me passes by,
looking for me elseware,
but haunting me no more.
Perhaps a tomb.
If I cannot find a sanctuary,
if you cannot give me sanctuary,
if I cannot find a place to lay my head,
and I end up being locked out in the cold.
I'll find eternal sanctuary,
within that tomb over there.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|luc (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, February 11 2003, 01:51 am|
i like a lot. the last. im a big fan of endings. obviously hehe and i like this one a lot too. you have good twist. i member one that really stuck to me. one about a kid having a dream in class or something then he fould something written in blood on his desk. i liked that one a lot ^.^ as much as this one. hehe..
|MERIDIAN (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 11:56 pm|
That's a good way to relief frustration and let go of aggravation. There couldn't have been a better poem.
Sax, such a nice start
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