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Message Bottle
26 December, 2002
Author: Sax

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(Secret Message revised)


It's a beach.
Next to a man,
standing before the shore,
sits a pink bolder.

It was once a grain of sand,
still pink,
but picked out from the rest of the beach,
rolled around and magnified,
its so big to me now,
I can't ignore it.

But for now I feel like I can,
I have a message to deliver,
I know not the reciever,
but my message is of kindness and of sincerity.

I've heard her calls before,
even as the waves splash on the beach,
but my message is in a bottle.

I hope my message in a bottle makes it,
I hope it finds a reciever,
I hope it lifts up her spirits.

So now I shall cast it out to sea.

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