Forgiven
2 April, 2004
Author: Scorpio
I'm suprised I didn't drop to my knees
The understanding of the truth
I'm suprised I didn't open my eyes to see
Any of the obvious clues
I wish I would've known
To have been included
I wish to have been disowned
Rather than simply ignored
Despite this thrashing anger
The rage within my cage of doom
I forgive you
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (64.12.116.204) -- Monday, April 5 2004, 10:39 pm I feel you on this poem!! Forgive and forget, one of the hardest things in life!! Good poem Scorpio! |
| Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Monday, April 5 2004, 10:50 pm It is hard to do, and to overcome that anger, to understand and accept is the strongest way to live life at its fullest. Thank you very much. ^^ |
| LinzAy (24.95.228.105) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 03:13 pm I'm such a softy. No matter how angry or hurt I am I will always forgive someone.....in either a short period of time or long. But I never forget the lesson i learned or the pain. |
| LinzAy (24.95.228.105) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 03:14 pm I hit enter before i posted what i thought about the poem. I like the abruptness of it, and the subject matter. Good poem Scorpio :) |
| Scorpio (209.175.72.252) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 08:24 pm Thank you very much. ^.^ For a while now, people very close to me or of that sort tend to hurt me really badly. And no matter how hard I try to keep angry, I always forgive them. Even if they do it again. I'm a softy too, but I guess forgiveness is the best way to go! |
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