There Was A Time
25 June, 2003
Author: Seizure
There was a time I could tell you anything
There was a time when your finger wore my ring
There was a time when we finally passed "hello"
There was a time when you said you'd never go
There was a time when you really cared for me
There was a time when love was a guarantee
There was a time when I'd give it all up for you
There was a time when you just knew it too
There was a time when we'd never be apart
There was a time when you tore at my heart
There was a time when life almost went our way
There was a time when you took my breath away
There was a time when our love had no price
There was a time when you would give advice
There was a time when you had all my trust
There was a time when this world was so just
There was a time when I said I had to leave
There was a time when you said you wouldn't grieve
There was a time when that tore up my soul
There was a time when I knew that was your goal
There was a time when I just could not care
There was a time when it was too much to bear
There was a time when I asked you to stay
There was the time that you left me anyway
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Ben (67.124.44.87) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 09:33 am This is a good hook. I know breaking up shreds yer head and yer heart. |
| Lost (24.147.243.252) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 02:26 pm Nice flow with the time line. |
| ryAn (24.153.177.14) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 04:35 pm very nice bro great rhyme |
| luc (68.74.124.212) -- Thursday, June 26 2003, 03:26 am great poem seiz. you always seem to make some really good ones.. and this one i think is but one of the top of all yours. i can relate to it deeply and perhaps that is why i love it so. |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.165) -- Friday, June 27 2003, 04:35 am Aw Seiz! I love it! I haven't been able to talk toyou at all so i sure as hell didnt know about this one...obviously. It has a different style from you to it. Nice!!!! |
| Ash (65.73.59.236) -- Monday, June 30 2003, 11:43 pm I've been waiting 4 a new one from u seizure. It was totally worth the wait. Did u write this from experience? |
| Seizure (216.47.215.144) -- Saturday, July 5 2003, 10:44 am I'm glad you all liked this one... since i've been here close to where most of my memories took place.. it's been real hard.. and these latest poems have just been flying out... i'm here to do a quick contract.. but it's taking it's toll on me already... i think you'll see that in future writings |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 04:06 am Hey! GREAT POEM! |
| Seizure (67.34.132.63) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 02:33 pm thanks... your comments are always appreciated. |
| Shellie (81.99.96.205) -- Monday, September 8 2003, 12:00 am just browsing through all your poetry now, and i am stunned. this actually bought a tear to my eye, very heart felt. it hit very close to home. amazing. x |
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